The Horse 2023

Environment & Technology

Feedback - Reducing daily CO2

Dear Nina, Alisha and Inês

Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.

1. can I get an impression of the project in a short time?

After reading your posts on the horse, we were able to get a short overview of your project "reducing daily CO2" and what you would like to do. The first impressions of your project are really good. It is a very exciting topic and you posted a lot of interesting information on the horse. 

2. Are all steps clearly communicated

The steps are really clear to us. We think it would be nice, if you add a timetable to the horse, so we can see the next steps. However, we think your updates on how far you've come are great!

3. what already looks promising, interesting

We think you have made a very good effort in posting lots of interesting information. Your concept is a great overwiev of your project. You have written a great "Vision and Imagination" and we can see that you have potential in the future. Additionally, it is important that you raise awareness about this matter. What really caught our eye is that you asked a question in your post and then answered it in detail.

4. what could be added

As we mentioned before, we would love if you could add a timetable.

5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?

In our opinion, the project is on a very good way. We hope you continue your project and work at the same pace.

We rate this project a 9.5/10. Keep up the excellent work! 

From: Wind Power Team (Luisa and Belinda)

Feedback " Green Roofs"

Hey, Daniel and Celine (and maybe Leon?)

It was interesting reading through all of the posts you have uploaded so far. It is impressive to see how much work all of you,  put into this project, you went into a kindergarten to work with kids on your project, you had an interview and so much more. Your dedication is truly wonderful!

Especially, the interview seems really well-thought-out, it is visible that you put a lot of work into it!

It is also really cool to see how much your project has grown since the beginning, from the vision and imagination until now! Keep the good work up, and I am excited to read more of your content!

Feedback for "Wastewater"

Overall, the project's goal and objectives seem well-defined and aligned with promoting public education and awareness of the wastewater treatment process and resource recovery. The approach outlined, including research, site visits, and content creation, appears to be practical. The potential collaborators identified, such as wastewater treatment facilities, industry experts, and local government, are relevant and could provide valuable input and support for the project. A date for the interview has been set.The project has the potential to make a positive impact by raising public awareness of wastewater treatment and resource recovery. With proper planning and execution, the project could educate the community to promote sustainable practices and contribute to a cleaner and more sustainable future.

Taking all of the above into consideration, we rate this project 8/10. We see great potential and could see this project making an impact. 

Peer feedback „Impact trough conflicts“

Can I get an impression of the project in a short time?

—> Yes, I think so. In my opinion, it is an important topic that is not widely discussed in the media. Everyone only talks about the war, but no one talks about the environmental aspect. I think it's great that you have chosen a topic that is not relevant to society.

Are all steps clearly communicated?

—> If I understand it correctly, the main focus is on interviewing people from Ukraine. Besides, they are not experts, but people who are engaged in completely different activities. Is that the intention? I have seen the planned questions for the interviews and the majority of them are good. I cannot decide whether the introduction questions are really necessary. I think I would have left them out.

What already looks promising, interesting

—> You have certainly made a very good choice with this theme. I think it's great that you have several people for an interview and not just one. It gives a broader and better picture.

What could be added?

—> Perhaps you could add some more questions to the interview. That's all I have to criticise.

In my opionion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1 - 10?

—> I think you are on the right track. Keep it up and it will be very good. I give you a fair 7.5/10

(This post is related to task 23)