Feedback:
Can I get an impression of the project in a short time?
Yes, it is possible to get a good overview of the project in a short amount of time. Your goals are very clear by looking at your posts. It‘s a very interesting project.
Are all steps clearly communicated?
We find it a bit difficult to comprehend all your steps. We see your vision and your interview but we can‘t tell how you got from the vision to the interview.
What already looks promising, interesting:
We think the interview that you have already looks quite promising. We think it could be very interesting if you could interview more professional athletes and compare their answers.
What could be added:
As mentioned before we think you should add your steps between your vision and your interview. You could as well translate your interview to English.
Where does the project stand on a scale from 1-10?
6 - In our opinion your project started out well. However, you haven‘t gotten very far with your project and some of your posts are missing. We think if you stay committed it could turn out in a great way. We wish you luck in completing your project.
Feedback from: Leonie, Luana, Alicia
Feedback for: Amil, Tom, Pascal
We got a perfect impression of the project bottle bricks. They did all necessary posts to get an impressive overview.
Because of the timeplan all steps were clear communicated. It is also visuable what they are planing to do in the future.
It is a very good example to show the amount of plastic we use every day. The fact that they can be reused is very promising and interesting.
We would like to see a picture of your end result when you are finished.
We rate your project a solide 9/10. It is very important because it affects our daily life.
Michelle & Ella
Feedback for Belinda and Luisa from Nina, Inês and Alisha
Today we had a look at the project "Wind power" by Belinda and Luisa.
Are all steps clearly communicated?
All the posts have a nice structure and give a clear overview of the project and the timeline. We especially like how they listed their goals for each week in a timetable. More...
Dear Sascha, Dear Janis
Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.
1. can I get an impression of the project in a short time?
The first impressions of your project are really good. It is a very exciting topic.
2. Are all steps clearly communicated
The steps are quite clear to me. The timetable helps a lot. However, I would like you to include deadline days in your timetable.
3. what already looks promising, interesting
I think you have made a very good effort in visiting this Co2-Capture machine in hinwil. I hope for your group that you can visit this plant to make a good project.
4. what could be added
as I mentioned before, I would love it if you could add some more dates to the timetable. I would also like the post to have a bit more structure.
5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?
in my opinion, the project is on a very good way. However, you are not so far and it still lacks a bit of structure. But I hope you stay on it and continue to work at the same pace.
I give you therefore a 6.5 out of 10 for your project.
Feedback by Marina and Pascal
After reading your posts on the horse, we were able to get a short overview of your project CO2 Capture and what you would like to do. You have written a great "Vision and Imagination" and we can see that you have potential in the future. It is clear that this project is still in its beginning-phase and is still being defined. The CO2-Machine is certainly useful and valuable. Additonally, it is important that you raise awareness about this matter. What really caught our eye is that you wrote your post like a fairy-tale, and this sets your project apart from others. Maybe you could compare the machine to trees and flowers and find a difference. We are sure that you can find a collaboration-partner and this project could be a success.
We rate this project a 7/10. Keep up the good work!
From: The Green Roof Team (Celine, Daniel, Leon)
Hey, Daniel and Celine (and maybe Leon?)
It was interesting reading through all of the posts you have uploaded so far. It is impressive to see how much work all of you, put into this project, you went into a kindergarten to work with kids on your project, you had an interview and so much more. Your dedication is truly wonderful!
Especially, the interview seems really well-thought-out, it is visible that you put a lot of work into it!
It is also really cool to see how much your project has grown since the beginning, from the vision and imagination until now! Keep the good work up, and I am excited to read more of your content!
Dear Tim, Dear Andrin
Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.
1. can i get an impression of the project in a short time?
A little. Getting impressions is still a little difficult at the current state. The group has not come very far yet. However, the group has already made an effort to contact a potential interview partner.
2. Are all steps clearly communicated
Unfortunately, we can not see any described steps. We would like to know what this group has in mind for their project. Tip: If steps are available, please publish them on theHorse.
3. what already looks promising, interesting
The topic is very exciting and I am very interested to read the final product. So far, however, not very much is available. But we hope you make good progress :)
4. what could be added
We would like to see some structure. That would make the overall understanding of this project a lot easier. Until that is in place, it is difficult to provide helpful feedback.
5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?
At this point, the project is still a 5 out of 10 for us. Once a structure or a more detailed plan is in place, the project is easily a 7 or 8 out of 10 for us.
In my opinion...
It is inspiring to see the comparison between us and Penans from Borneo, everything about life, the culture and nature there and Switzerland.
In a short time, I already realized that Yuri has fun with the project and always keeps us up to date.
This can be seen in every post, because every post was written very consider. All steps are documented very carefully, and you always know where you stand.
In my opinion, your goal sounds promising. «The goal for this project is to show, that there is a different way to live your life and find happiness.» As it arouses the interest in reading more.
I don't know what else could be added here, because it is still very early.
From a scale of 1-10 I would give Yuri and his project a 9 so far, so it is very easy to understand, it sounds interesting and exciting and will definitely look in more often.
I hope that the "Penan from Borneo" project will continue to be successful.
Overall, the project's goal and objectives seem well-defined and aligned with promoting public education and awareness of the wastewater treatment process and resource recovery. The approach outlined, including research, site visits, and content creation, appears to be practical. The potential collaborators identified, such as wastewater treatment facilities, industry experts, and local government, are relevant and could provide valuable input and support for the project. A date for the interview has been set.The project has the potential to make a positive impact by raising public awareness of wastewater treatment and resource recovery. With proper planning and execution, the project could educate the community to promote sustainable practices and contribute to a cleaner and more sustainable future.
Taking all of the above into consideration, we rate this project 8/10. We see great potential and could see this project making an impact.
Hey Guys!
Overall you did a great project so far and I'm sure you're on the right path for success!
Here are some points I noticed:
-It's good to see, that you're up to standards with your project.
-The regular status updates are interesting and done in a good quality.
-The ad-post you guys did well done!
-It's cool to see that you found a topic you enjoy and feel connected to.
The only thing I could think of what you could add would maybe be a quick summary of what you guys are planing on doing. Like maybe if you could do a self experiment or something similar.
I would rate your project a solid 8/10.
Can I get an impression of the project in a short time?
—> Yes, I think so. In my opinion, it is an important topic that is not widely discussed in the media. Everyone only talks about the war, but no one talks about the environmental aspect. I think it's great that you have chosen a topic that is not relevant to society.
Are all steps clearly communicated?
—> If I understand it correctly, the main focus is on interviewing people from Ukraine. Besides, they are not experts, but people who are engaged in completely different activities. Is that the intention? I have seen the planned questions for the interviews and the majority of them are good. I cannot decide whether the introduction questions are really necessary. I think I would have left them out.
What already looks promising, interesting
—> You have certainly made a very good choice with this theme. I think it's great that you have several people for an interview and not just one. It gives a broader and better picture.
What could be added?
—> Perhaps you could add some more questions to the interview. That's all I have to criticise.
In my opionion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1 - 10?
—> I think you are on the right track. Keep it up and it will be very good. I give you a fair 7.5/10
(This post is related to task 23)