Janis and Yuri gave us feedback on our project, they thought it was very good overall. On their advice, we have adjusted the titles a bit and added more pictures. We were very pleased that they did not find much to fault with our project and are very pleased ourselves.
This post was published by Damian and Christian together.
Have you always wanted to know more about wind power?
Then check out our article about wind power in Switzerland and India!
https://dontwastemy.energy/2023/05/23/wind-power-in-the-local-area/
By Luisa and Belinda
Will ski slopes still look like this in the future? Go find it out via the following link!
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Die Gefährdung von Korallenriffen
Als Schülerinnen und Schüler einer Wirtschaftsschule sind wir uns bewusst, wie wichtig der Schutz der Umwelt und natürlicher Ressourcen für eine nachhaltige wirtschaftliche Entwicklung ist. In diesem Artikel werden wir uns näher mit den Hauptursachen der Korallenbleiche und dem damit einhergehenden Verlust von Korallenriffen beschäftigen und diskutieren, welche Maßnahmen ergriffen werden können, um diese wichtigen Unterwasser-Ökosysteme zu schützen.
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Dear Nina, Alisha and Inês
Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.
1. can I get an impression of the project in a short time?
After reading your posts on the horse, we were able to get a short overview of your project "reducing daily CO2" and what you would like to do. The first impressions of your project are really good. It is a very exciting topic and you posted a lot of interesting information on the horse.
2. Are all steps clearly communicated
The steps are really clear to us. We think it would be nice, if you add a timetable to the horse, so we can see the next steps. However, we think your updates on how far you've come are great!
3. what already looks promising, interesting
We think you have made a very good effort in posting lots of interesting information. Your concept is a great overwiev of your project. You have written a great "Vision and Imagination" and we can see that you have potential in the future. Additionally, it is important that you raise awareness about this matter. What really caught our eye is that you asked a question in your post and then answered it in detail.
4. what could be added
As we mentioned before, we would love if you could add a timetable.
5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?
In our opinion, the project is on a very good way. We hope you continue your project and work at the same pace.
We rate this project a 9.5/10. Keep up the excellent work!
From: Wind Power Team (Luisa and Belinda)
Overall, the text is a short but informative piece about the impact of glacier melting on the planet. It highlights the various emotions and thoughts that people have about this issue and how it can stimulate creativity and innovation.
Communication: The steps are not explicitly mentioned in the text, but the information is clear and easy to understand. The text does a good job of communicating the issue of glacier melting and its impact on the planet.
Promising/Interesting: The text presents an interesting perspective on the impact of glacier melting, emphasizing its emotional and imaginative impact. It also provides a call to action to address this issue, which is promising.
What could be added: The text could provide more specific examples of the impact of glacier melting, such as the effects on wildlife or human communities that rely on glaciers for water.
Scale of 1-10: I would rate this text a 8 on a scale of 1-10. While it is a well-written and informative piece, it could benefit from more specific examples to fully illustrate the impact of glacier melting.
You did a very good job on the project so far. We like the idea of spreading awareness of fast fashion and pointing out things that are important to avoid. Your vision is clear and we cant wait to see the end result. We appreciate the level of creativity you brought into this project. It‘s clear that you put a lot of thought into how to make it stand out.
We like the idea of collaboration partners from india, since fast fashion is wide spread in that area.
What’s missing is an interview or a call with a collaboration partner, but you guys are definately working on it. Can’t wait to see more!
We rate your project an 8.5 in a scale of 1-10.
This post was published by Mia, Edmond and Yannick
Overall, the text gives a clear overview of the progress made and future plans for the green roof project. It's great to see that the team has already taken action by purchasing the green roof material, contacting potential collaborators and arranging interviews. Using specific dates and times adds a sense of urgency and organization to the project plan.
The team's vision and imagination for the green roof project is well articulated and emphasizes the importance of education and awareness for young children. Also commendable is that the team attempted to compare the growth of a miniature green roof in Switzerland with one in a more exotic setting to demonstrate the influence of environmental factors on plant growth.
One suggestion would be to include more details about the budget and timeline of the project. It's unclear how much money will be allocated to the project or when the team plans to complete the project.
Overall, the team is off to a great start and appears committed to promoting the use of green roofs in urban areas.
Evaluation: 9/10