Overall, the text gives a clear overview of the progress made and future plans for the green roof project. It's great to see that the team has already taken action by purchasing the green roof material, contacting potential collaborators and arranging interviews. Using specific dates and times adds a sense of urgency and organization to the project plan.
The team's vision and imagination for the green roof project is well articulated and emphasizes the importance of education and awareness for young children. Also commendable is that the team attempted to compare the growth of a miniature green roof in Switzerland with one in a more exotic setting to demonstrate the influence of environmental factors on plant growth.
One suggestion would be to include more details about the budget and timeline of the project. It's unclear how much money will be allocated to the project or when the team plans to complete the project.
Overall, the team is off to a great start and appears committed to promoting the use of green roofs in urban areas.
Evaluation: 9/10