Feedback:

Can I get an impression of the project in a short time?

Yes, it is possible to get a good overview of the project in a short amount of time. Your goals are very clear by looking at your posts. It‘s a very interesting project.

Are all steps clearly communicated?

We find it a bit difficult to comprehend all your steps. We see your vision and your interview but we can‘t tell how you got from the vision to the interview. 

What already looks promising, interesting:

We think the interview that you have already looks quite promising. We think it could be very interesting if you could interview more professional athletes and compare their answers.

What could be added:

As mentioned before we think you should add your steps between your vision and your interview. You could as well translate your interview to English.

Where does the project stand on a scale from 1-10?

6 - In our opinion your project started out well. However, you haven‘t gotten very far with your project and some of your posts are missing. We think if you stay committed it could turn out in a great way. We wish you luck in completing your project.

Feedback from: Leonie, Luana, Alicia

Feedback for: Amil, Tom, Pascal

We got a perfect impression of the project bottle bricks. They did all necessary posts to get an impressive overview. 

Because of the timeplan all steps were clear communicated. It is also visuable what they are planing to do in the future.

It is a very good example to show the amount of plastic we use every day. The fact that they can be reused is very promising and interesting.

We would like to see a picture of your end result when you are finished.

We rate your project a solide 9/10. It is very important because it affects our daily life.

Michelle & Ella

Dear Nina, Alisha and Inês

Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.

1. can I get an impression of the project in a short time?

After reading your posts on the horse, we were able to get a short overview of your project "reducing daily CO2" and what you would like to do. The first impressions of your project are really good. It is a very exciting topic and you posted a lot of interesting information on the horse. 

2. Are all steps clearly communicated

The steps are really clear to us. We think it would be nice, if you add a timetable to the horse, so we can see the next steps. However, we think your updates on how far you've come are great!

3. what already looks promising, interesting

We think you have made a very good effort in posting lots of interesting information. Your concept is a great overwiev of your project. You have written a great "Vision and Imagination" and we can see that you have potential in the future. Additionally, it is important that you raise awareness about this matter. What really caught our eye is that you asked a question in your post and then answered it in detail.

4. what could be added

As we mentioned before, we would love if you could add a timetable.

5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?

In our opinion, the project is on a very good way. We hope you continue your project and work at the same pace.

We rate this project a 9.5/10. Keep up the excellent work! 

From: Wind Power Team (Luisa and Belinda)

Feedback for Belinda and Luisa from Nina, Inês and Alisha

Today we had a look at the project "Wind power" by Belinda and Luisa. 

Are all steps clearly communicated?

All the posts have a nice structure and give a clear overview of the project and the timeline. We especially like how they listed their goals for each week in a timetable. More...

Overall, the text is a short but informative piece about the impact of glacier melting on the planet. It highlights the various emotions and thoughts that people have about this issue and how it can stimulate creativity and innovation.

Communication: The steps are not explicitly mentioned in the text, but the information is clear and easy to understand. The text does a good job of communicating the issue of glacier melting and its impact on the planet.

Promising/Interesting: The text presents an interesting perspective on the impact of glacier melting, emphasizing its emotional and imaginative impact. It also provides a call to action to address this issue, which is promising.

What could be added: The text could provide more specific examples of the impact of glacier melting, such as the effects on wildlife or human communities that rely on glaciers for water.

Scale of 1-10: I would rate this text a 8 on a scale of 1-10. While it is a well-written and informative piece, it could benefit from more specific examples to fully illustrate the impact of glacier melting.

Dear Sascha, Dear Janis

Below you can find our feedback regarding your project.

1. can I get an impression of the project in a short time?

The first impressions of your project are really good. It is a very exciting topic.

2. Are all steps clearly communicated

The steps are quite clear to me. The timetable helps a lot. However, I would like you to include deadline days in your timetable.

3. what already looks promising, interesting

I think you have made a very good effort in visiting this Co2-Capture machine in hinwil. I hope for your group that you can visit this plant to make a good project.

4. what could be added

as I mentioned before, I would love it if you could add some more dates to the timetable. I would also like the post to have a bit more structure.

5. In your opinion, where does the project stand on a scale of 1-10?

in my opinion, the project is on a very good way. However, you are not so far and it still lacks a bit of structure. But I hope you stay on it and continue to work at the same pace.

I give you therefore a 6.5 out of 10 for your project.

Feedback by Marina and Pascal

Pictures for "Penan from Boreno"

All of the pictures bellow have been taken and belong to Tomas Wüthrich. The pictures have been made on his journey to the Penan in 2019.

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After reading your posts on the horse, we were able to get a short overview of your project CO2 Capture and what you would like to do. You have written a great "Vision and Imagination" and we can see that you have potential in the future. It is clear that this project is still in its beginning-phase and is still being defined. The CO2-Machine is certainly useful and valuable. Additonally, it is important that you raise awareness about this matter. What really caught our eye is that you wrote your post like a fairy-tale, and this sets your project apart from others. Maybe you could compare the machine to trees and flowers and find a difference. We are sure that you can find a collaboration-partner and this project could be a success. 

We rate this project a 7/10. Keep up the good work! 

From: The Green Roof Team (Celine, Daniel, Leon)

Hey guys

In the last posts we had some good inputs, which explain how the machine works and what the duty of this machine is. In conclusion the machine transforms ambient air into co 2-filtered air. So the question is: How many kilograms of co2 filtered air does this machine produce per day?

Me and Sascha think that this machine produces 1 kilogram co2-filtered air per day.

To compare, estimates suggest that trees can sequester about 10kg of CO2 per year on average globally.

Write your answers in the comments:)

The right answer will be on our next post.

The melting of glaciers is a worrisome problem that has different effects on our planet. When we consider the vision and imagination of glacier melting, it can bring about various emotions and thoughts in people.

For some, the melting of glaciers might bring up images of vast icy landscapes slowly disappearing, leaving behind only water and bare earth. This may cause a feeling of sadness and loss for the disappearance of such a majestic natural feature.

For others, it may evoke thoughts about the impacts of melting glaciers on our planet, such as rising sea levels and increased flooding. This may inspire ideas about the urgent need to take action to fight climate change and protect our planet.

In terms of imagination, the issue of glacier melting can stimulate creativity and innovation in finding solutions. It may inspire people to think of new ways to reduce greenhouse gas emissions or develop new technologies for renewable energy.

Overall, the vision and imagination of glacier melting can have a significant impact on how we view this issue and our responsibility to address it. It can motivate us to take action and work towards a sustainable future for our planet.

Hey, Daniel and Celine (and maybe Leon?)

It was interesting reading through all of the posts you have uploaded so far. It is impressive to see how much work all of you,  put into this project, you went into a kindergarten to work with kids on your project, you had an interview and so much more. Your dedication is truly wonderful!

Especially, the interview seems really well-thought-out, it is visible that you put a lot of work into it!

It is also really cool to see how much your project has grown since the beginning, from the vision and imagination until now! Keep the good work up, and I am excited to read more of your content!